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| Author: | admin [ Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | "that" or "which"? |
| Author: | admin [ Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "that" or "which"? |
| Author: | AngsCopywriting [ Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "that" or "which"? |
That example reminds me of 'which witch is which?' "It's a job which pays well, and which offers great conditions." Couldn't you take the second one out? And, I'd change it to 'that'. It sounds rather quite repetitive... 'It's a job that pays well and offers great conditions' So yes...I have to go with Chris on this one (if it makes you feel any better, I didn't know the difference between restrictive and non-restrictive clauses either). |
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| Author: | admin [ Thu Sep 24, 2009 10:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "that" or "which"? |
Yes, you're right. My example was a bad one. But I think you know what I mean. There are times when you need to use the construction, "which blah blah blah blah blah blah blah, and which blah blah blah blah blah". I can't think of any now, but I know they exist. |
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| Author: | Patrick [ Thu Nov 19, 2009 6:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: "that" or "which"? |
I think that the word which is a good way to break up a sentence. If your sentence is running a little too long, the incorporation of a comma and the word 'which' would give the reader a little breathing space and let the sentence flow a little better. When the sentence is short and direct, the word 'that' is best utilised. |
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