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Author:  lgreally [ Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:30 am ]
Post subject:  I would appreciate a quick look at my sales page!

Hi everyone

Ive created a new sales page and I would really appreciate some feedback.

When sent to my list the conversion was about 20%.

Now I've launched a PPC campaign, we have not had many conversions yet but the average time spent on the page is over 5 mins. I think maybe people are reading the start and therefore the title and initial copy is good however my call to action is weak.
About 30% are clicking the link at the end.. maybe I'm not building enough trust?

Anyway would really appreciate some feedback. Have just realised I cant put the link in as I've not posted enough yet.
http://www.happybodloseweight.com/report.html

Thanks
Louise

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