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| Author: | mph [ Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Beat Writer's Block with Hypnosis - please critique my copy |
Hello. I was just wondering if you could please let me know what you think of the impact of this letter: http://www.slicedot.com/kwb/ I'm interested, of course, in what you think about the quality of the letter itself. But I also have a few questions about formatting... - is the Courier font ok? - have I used enough white space? - does the letter "flow"? - do I need to add more pictures or anything to make the text less ... dense? - is it a good idea to include the price of the product in a subhead? or should i tuck it away in a paragraph? Last but not least, thanks a lot in advance! P |
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